Thursday, July 21, 2011

What do you think of my poem?

yeah its pretty good on a scale of 1-10 1 being bad 10 being awesome. id give you a 7 roughly. my favorite part was when it says silence was her most trustworthy companion. but i didnt like the question why strange child? & the weekend question. no offense but you had a back then feeling & then with those lines it kind of brought back the present which is not bad but ruins it all try using a differnt vocabulary. poems are supposed to be things that make people think & wonder what they mean not be so detailed & explained. im sorry for the criticizim but i want you to get better. good luck! i hope you continue to write!!!

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